Brian Smith+Matthew Perpetua=

what i am writing right now is really really good.

it kind of amazes me.

it is about two working kids.

one is in love with a girl.

their daily days.

they work on the docks, moving and unloading ships.

they live in a small town,

and have to drive to the city every morning to work.

they are around twenty years old. the not main character drives an old red truck.

i think it is set in old america.

they hit the city with the promise of friday night.

but some bad things happen.

and i don't even know this yet, but the girl is really the main character.

what a test it will be to write her!